Friday, September 17, 2010

who to be


who to be
I am not who I want to be

I do not feel like me



I‘ve been molded by society

and the rules are controlling me

I’ve not been who I want to be

I wish I knew what I want for me



I want more determination

but I wonder if within the duration

of the rest of the time I have left

will I be me or will death take my life by theft



I may change my life one day

and maybe then I will know what to say
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17 comments:

  1. Mecha Six VIISeptember 17, 2010 at 10:38 PM

    good luck

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  2. Piripi AnxoSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:57 PM

    nice poem!

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  3. BLUERADSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:09 PM

    nice poem, keep it up

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  4. modest crisisSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:22 PM

    This is exactly how I feel.

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  5. Dr. SteveSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:24 PM

    Fuck rules! Rules of humanity are all that are needed. Figure out what you want to say, and come and post it. You'll feel a lot better about it.

    Keep the poems comin'!

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  6. KyleSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:40 PM

    The internet is a great place to express yourself.

    Keep it up.

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  7. Alex DeLargeSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:52 PM

    i liketh this poem

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  8. down2brasstaxSeptember 18, 2010 at 12:13 AM

    thats deep man. you got talent

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  9. MellowCokeSeptember 18, 2010 at 12:21 AM

    Very deep poem.

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  10. - Enfermo -September 18, 2010 at 12:47 AM

    nice poem

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  11. Nerd LifeSeptember 18, 2010 at 1:35 AM

    I appreciate your kind comments on my blog :)

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  12. blasphenomenonSeptember 18, 2010 at 3:16 AM

    great poem.

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  13. evertbloggerSeptember 18, 2010 at 3:38 AM

    I can find myself in these words

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  14. Jessi DSeptember 18, 2010 at 4:28 AM

    Great poem man

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  15. Come At Me BroSeptember 18, 2010 at 5:37 AM

    Love it!

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2010 at 11:35 AM

    nice post!
    i like your blog!
    supportin ;)

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  17. `†he Պen†al Պasochis†September 18, 2010 at 5:29 PM

    i feel the same way

    http://wordofdodd.blogspot.com/

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